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Kriter727 Blog Last Activity 10 years ago 426 views 7 comments
Unable to move, unable to speak,
unable to smell, unable to touch,
unable to hear, unable to do anything but see, and feel, I am trapped.
Enclosed within a glass pane that leaves me as exposed to you as much as you want me to be,
just as you are as exposed as much that you feel secure doing.
I see you, I feel you, just as you do me.
You walk around my enclosure, knowing that if we were to act out of haste just for me to be free,
you would die.
You've tried before, tried freeing me, yet I'm never willing to part from my ways,
I love you to much to change the situation.
I see all of you, your happiness and your pains, your secrets and your fears, so on and so forth.
You know me as well, at least partially from what I'm able to show you and from what you can feel.
Your issues run deep, your scars heal slowly, barely able to at all.
The only cure is for me to be with you, for us to be able to be together and be seen together,
and yet it seems as if it's just an impossible dream. Many times I watch you suffer, tortured and raped by the constant brutality of life.
I can't move to your rescue and force all the pain away,
not able to smell the raw stench of ugly mixed with your beauty,
not able to hold you until you can stand again,
not able to hear your innocence as it is ripped away,
and the cruelty of the world as it laughs.
Not able to do anything but watch and feel,
and it is the greatest gift the devil was able grant.
Your face, beautiful, now twisted in horror as tears sprint down your canvas,
tears that I've produced for you again and again.
Your screams, your desperate cries for help for love and care,
ignored by those who are suppose to be closest to you.
It's a daily fight, the internal and external struggles you go through and you take it all.
I curse fate for leaving me in this predicament, damming all of my luck in the process.
You ask me to let you go and I can't, the selfish coward in me doesn't want to lose you with every fiber
of my being, and yet I cant be there for you, thus I've already lost you, and I am already alone.
You're still here,
and yet I've killed you
the eyes that used to shine now dull and unresponsive
as I am forever trapped in my place,
you in yours.

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10 years ago

This is sad and at the same time wonderful. Thanks for sharing it. Please keep writing.....

10 years ago

more sides to me that an hexagonical cone,lol

Kriter727
10 years ago

Scott I see you have a poetic side as well lol

Kriter727
10 years ago

Thanks guys, this is dedicated to a very good friend of mine on here. Wouldn't have written this without him

10 years ago

wow you have a natural gift with words, like a piece of fresh air that has left its mark on a sundrenched beach, with just the slightest of movement of grains of sand..

10 years ago

Thanks Kriter I was hooked on every word. I miss talking to you.

10 years ago

Dude, you had me after the first word.