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After the Ball - a poem...maybe it's all the jazz I'm listening to

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mophead2009
mophead2009
9 years ago

desire man thts it word play poetry theatre hey like that haha desire man in my fucking dreams sorry just how things are me in my tree - giles

9 years ago

@Giles - yeah it is a bit cryptic...probably too much and a bit sloppy tbh..more about desire than love...and just loosely plays with a series of historical and ahistorical frames (the prehistoric, the idea of Eden and the 'tree', the medieval, Prester John's Land, the modern age) to talk about desire in a kind of chilled out way (that's what I meant about listening to too much jazz lately..)

mophead2009
mophead2009
9 years ago

listerning to jazz and trying to interpret the criptic references and the imagery and the meaning - guess its a poem about falling in love - giles

9 years ago

Hey that's cool beart and Mike....wasn't sure this more 'literary' style of poem would be to people's tastes but I thought I'd give it a go :) I think most ppl don't care for this kind of poetry nowadays apart from us literature nerds, so that's all fair enough. I'll always write my more funny/rhyming ones. Cheers guys xx

beart1066
beart1066
9 years ago

OK, I'm very sorry, but I have to give up on that one, too many references I don't understand and stretching my English skills to the breaking point :-)