I'm a professional writer. As a day job, and having had two books published under my own name. For the first time I've started working on a gay erotic novel, just to try it out.
This genre is new to me and feels strange so far. It's as though I'm still really only finding my feet with it because I've never attempted this kind of writing before. I like the challenge.
So I thought I'd test drive the opening, the first couple of pages, here on GBT, if anyone's interested. Openings always make a difference, and I try to get them right. It makes it easier to just get into a flow after that. And I've noticed erotic writing gets posted or shared here from time to time.
I'd welcome and appreciate any feedback, good or critical, bearing in mind this is just the opening pages (so nothing sexual happening yet), and bearing in mind this will be a full length novel, not a short story.
If you were reading a gay erotic novel opening like this would you keep reading? Why or why not?
https://danieltournierbooks.wordpress.com/2017/01/02/erotic-novel-draft-first-pages/
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LOL...eat your Easter eggs boys.1. You can't see your ears without a mirror.
2. You can't count your hair.
3. You can't breath through your nose with your tongue out.
4. You just tried No.3
6. When you did No.3 you realized that it's possible, only you look like a dog.
7. You're smiling right now because you were fooled.
8. You skipped No.5
9. You just checked to see if there is No.5
10. Now you're laughing out loud.
Have a nice day..!!
I just love boy's feet and toes. Hot legs do it for me, too. Kind of an appetizer to the main course. They must me of legal age (17 in Illinois, USA). Anyone else feel the same way?
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